Comments on: Building a dynasty

By: Luke Morris

Luke Morris — Wed, 21 Nov 2012 18:52:48 +0000

I was emailed this article by a friend who thought I may be interested in reading about Brendan Rodgers and Liverpool.

Whilst I agree with many of the (obvious) points, the use of punctuation is shocking. What, is with the use, of, random, commas?

if you’re truly an aspiring journalist, you need to sort that out. It makes the publication you’re representing seem amateur.

By: Alan

Alan — Mon, 19 Nov 2012 13:02:20 +0000

Good read James. As a Red, its interesting seeing an opinion like this come from a different perspective as a supporter of a different club.

As for the typo’s don’t worry about those too much, you’re points came across very well.

By: James Cartwright

James Cartwright — Sun, 18 Nov 2012 15:57:03 +0000

I appreciate the constructive criticism. Typos are the bane of my life tbh.

By: Nick Cowell

Nick Cowell — Sun, 18 Nov 2012 14:07:18 +0000

lol *employ not emply!!!

By: Nick Cowell

Nick Cowell — Sun, 18 Nov 2012 13:36:12 +0000

Don’t mean to be a pedant, but if you’re an aspiring journalist, you might want to emply a proofreader and/or spell checker! Despite this, I enjoyed the article!